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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-08-27 02:36 AM



No longer I sleep in the quietness of the night
I bear to stand witness the awaken of the imps
I look towards my left and I see the image of a great evil,
I glance once more and I see the shadow of mine,
Shackled in guilt the shadow longing for daylight,
For in the day it is sent away,

As night approaches once more I am afraid to sleep,
In the daylight I am lost in the heat of confusion,
Scars on my chest bear witness of the battle,
For the wink of my eyes my shadow ceases to be.


Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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1 posted 2000-08-27 03:28 PM


In a word...AWESOME!

"Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night."
-Edgar Allen Poe


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2 posted 2000-08-27 03:52 PM


Wow... cool, Xeonox...
Have to read it again....

Xeonox
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3 posted 2000-08-27 10:36 PM


Are you guys trying to spoil me with your great comments?  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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4 posted 2000-08-27 11:36 PM


nope...its the truth i say! this was the sh*t my friend!

All i want in life is to be happy
It seems to me
How messed up things can be
Everytime i get ahead
I fell more dead
~KoRn~~

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5 posted 2000-08-28 12:42 PM


This leaves alot to the imagination. Very well done, but one thing....What is an imp? I think i've heard the word before. Is it some kind of demon, or other evil being?

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6 posted 2000-08-28 01:16 AM


Imp is a demon. Thanks for asking  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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