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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle 
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Out of fashion, once adherence of hand surrenders to its resolve. Bleeding hearts are mocked as today's crisp portions were once contoured points of perfection. Naturally-formed irony is its fertility in captivity, stark display of petty trivia when it detaches. Lying solitary or inconspicuous among the suppressive cache; neither awards consolation when raw wind's sharp precision seals its fate. ...chanson~ |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Bravo! You have managed to confuse the hell out of me! Good Job! ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Sorry about the confusion. It's about a leaf falling from the tree/dying. Bleeding hearts are flowering plants. Perhaps the last two verses are understandable with this explanation. Sometimes I write too obscurely. Apologies!  ....chanson~ |
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