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sash
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since 2000-06-22
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0 posted 2000-08-25 11:18 PM




Blessed new soul
I have waited for you..
The time of forgiveness
As life starts anew..
Destiny clawed your
guilt-ridden past..
Undaunted forgiveness
Has brought you at last.



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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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1 posted 2000-08-25 11:30 PM


Beautiful poem celebrating beautiful new beginnings  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
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2 posted 2000-08-26 02:52 AM


The past is a delightfully miserable thing to behold, don’t you agree?  Some people embrace there past accomplishments, while others run from it with reckless abandon.   Still others spend all their future trap in their pasts, not able to accept the course of time.  
Beware, “new” does not mean free, things have a way of balancing out in the end.  Sometimes in a less than pleasant way.   Good luck with the new soul, but remember for what you traded, nothing is free.



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sash
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since 2000-06-22
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3 posted 2000-08-26 03:02 AM


Isis~~Thank You. You really seem to know the meaning of this post.


sash
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

4 posted 2000-08-26 03:25 AM


Deranger~~Thanks for the warning, but I wouldn't trade my true 'soul' for anything. I agree new may not always mean better, but to better one's self a new beginning might just suffice.
Be well...

      ~Sash~
      



LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

5 posted 2000-08-26 03:46 AM


Wow! I liked it so much!
Good writing, Sash  

Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
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6 posted 2000-08-27 02:42 PM


Good poem!!  I know what time can do...
    So do you!!  Silver lining? I hope!
  Thanx!

Click


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