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Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

0 posted 2000-08-25 04:37 AM

hi yall
well it looks like i am just full of inspreation this week. this poem is for my friend chandra. well she is more then a friend. she is the one i love. sadly she has cancer and has to be operated on tomarrow. i am praying and hoping for the best. i only have three loves in my life. chandra, wanda, and isis. i have lost wanda forever. and i might not ever get over her. and chandra has touched my heart as much if not more then wanda. so this is for her. i love her alot. and if i lost her i would be a wreck. hope yall like.

Last Dance

Open your heart
and close your eyes
Let me give you something
That you could only fantisize
Come with me
and you will see
that your dreamz
will become reality
I want to hold you forever
and never break this embrace
as you look into my eyes
my heart begins to race
to me you are my everything
my one and only love
to me you are my angel
sent from the heavens above
you saved me from deaths fatal grasp
you said here come take my hand
and i will show you a love like you've never seen
and take you to the promised land
Why would you pick a guy like me?
i'm just a lonely kid from the streets
Doing what ever it takes to survive
Just trying to make ends meet
You showed me the light of day
When all i seen was the dark of night
I stood there with arms wide open
and you came in and held me tight
I promised the day i met you
that i would never let you go
You will always mean alot to me
i love you more then words can show
your footprints are forever
on the beaches of my soul
The first time you said I love you
my little heart you stole
I will be with you forever
and nothing can tear that apart
Cuz no matter where you are or what you do
you will always be in my heart
I wish i could kiss you
and show you how i feel
to show you that
my love is for real
so let me hold you close
and feel you one last time
lets make all of this real
insted of a fantisy in my mind
i cant give you money
or all those fancy things
all i can give you is my wounded heart
and alittle dimaond ring
so take me as i am hun
my heart belongs to you
I no longer control my desteny
Its all up to you
Wont you take me by my hand
and hold me for all eternity
Walking together into the sunset
all alone, just you and me
I can make your dreamz come true
Just please give me the chance
take my hand and hold me close
and lets give our love
one last dance..

Jesse C. Jaymz

Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

1 posted 2000-08-25 08:41 AM

Oh... Jesse, it's so beautiful, you've really spilt your gut here

I really really liked the line "Your footprints are forever on the beaches of my soul"
It's really beautiful , warm , open and cute...
I Wish you all the best with your girlfriend and I pray that the procedure goes well!

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

2 posted 2000-08-25 10:45 AM

lm
thanks for your reply. yes i am praying that the surgry goes well. she is the sweetest person i ever met. and yes her footprints are on my soul. and they will be forever. thanks for your reply.

Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-08-25 08:52 PM

I too pray her surgery goes well Jess. Please email me and let me know? And if I were you my brother I'd show this to her, when she has recovered somewhat..
*hugs*
Isis

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

4 posted 2000-08-26 03:02 AM

hun
*hugs* i did show this to her. just before she went to the hospital. she loved it and cried. and yes the surgery went well. =) she called me right afterwards. she was alittle drugged up but doing fine. i am surprized that this didnt get many responses. oh well i dont write for responses. i write from my heart. *hugs* thanks sis for you comments. and an e-mail will be heading your way soon
love you
jesse

Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

sash
Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 125

5 posted 2000-08-26 04:21 AM

Jesse~~As I wipe the tears from my eyes, I wish You and Your girlfriend a wonderful and happy future together. Great heartfelt poem! You and Yours be well.

~Sash~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-08-26 07:42 AM

Beautiful poetry flowing from your heart...happy to see surgery went well...looks like you will get that dance...much happiness to you and her..James

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

7 posted 2000-08-26 05:14 PM

sash- thanks hun for the comment. i wish she was my girl. sadly that wont happen for awhile. see she is in a very abusive and bad marrige. i love her with all my heart though. and i know in my heart someday we will be together. but for now we will always be together in my heart. thanks for the comment sash. *hugs*

james- thanks for comment. mabey some day i will get that dance. =)

Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

8 posted 2000-08-27 11:12 AM

So romanitc my friend, I hope she is well.
You did a great job on this.

Joel

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

9 posted 2000-08-27 02:12 PM

thanks joel
i just wish i had someone to share this romance with. =( thanks man

Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

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