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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2000-08-24 09:10 PM


How come everybody I see still looks like you
No matter what I try or what I do
Even after all you've put me through
Everybody I see still looks like you

How come every single day you're on my mind
I look around and all I find
Are thoughts of you and past behind
Yet every single day you're on my mind

How come I still feel you deep in my heart
I tried my best to make a new start
Ever sense the last day that we did part
I still can feel you deep in my heart

How come I now ask these questions of you
Because I don't know what next I should do
I know this is drivel these thoughts that I spew
But everybody I see still looks like you

G.  A. Webb< !signature-->

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't



[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 08-24-2000).]

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G. A. Webb
Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
1 posted 2000-08-24 09:11 PM


This is for you Lynn, if you ever read this.

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


monique
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
2 posted 2000-08-24 10:23 PM


I love this poem
You fed my obsession

monique

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-08-25 12:08 PM


Hello my friend, long time no see!!!!!!
I think most of us have a someone that we can't get out of heads like your Lynn.  We know it is wrong, and unhealthy, but still we stubbornly cling to the memories - the visions of them.
All we can try to do is to get on with things, and make our life REALLY busy so we have less time to think!!!
It's hard to move on I know....
Remember old friend you can still email anytime  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

4 posted 2000-08-25 02:54 AM


Hmm... a very touching poem, with a lot of expression.  All the best.  Take care.  
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2000-08-25 07:17 AM


How come you've got this great poem on site
and I didn't get to read it till I came here tonight.

Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

6 posted 2000-08-25 08:30 AM


Wow, G. A. what can I say?
Towards someone in my life
I feel the same way...
When I'm driving my car or at the mall
I suddenly see him
But it's not him at all...
I get really nervous and slightly insane
But it's not him at all
My excitement was in vain...

Wonderful poem, realy hit home!

G. A. Webb
Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
7 posted 2000-08-25 11:29 AM


monique: Thank you! I'm happy to have given your obsession something meaty to feed upon...hehe!  

Isis: Hello Isis. It has been a while. I have posted a few things a little while ago that I don't think you saw and figured you were probably on vacation or something. If things ever settle down on my end I'll e-mail ya. Sorry it's been so long. Thank you for your support. I'm glad you liked this piece. Take care!  

taramw: Thank you and all the best back at ya!  

Kethry: Well, I just posted it last night...lol. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!  

LM: WOW! What a great reply! Thank you so much! I can see you know exactly where I'm coming from. I wish you the very best in getting past this. Thank you again!  

Once again thank you all for your comments. They really mean alot to me, that's why I'm here.

G< !signature-->

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't



[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 08-25-2000).]

sonjes
Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
8 posted 2000-08-26 05:33 PM


sometimes I think that I am totally over a former love only to be reminded by the slightest of things...your work speaks volumes to those who tend to obsess.  

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

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