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LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585


0 posted 2000-08-24 05:39 PM



Lil One, your reply on "Vicious game" inspired me so much, I decided to write this one for you...
Hope you like it  

P.S. Have no title, guys, feel free to suggest.

Accept my fondness,
Take my care,
Take my feelings,
Be aware.

Embrace my kindness,
Take my hopes,
Take my wishes,
Share my thoughts.

Keep my laughter,
Take my smile,
Save my image
In your mind.

Trust my friendship,
Take my soul,
Take my love
And give me your.

Take my passion,
Take my art,
Take my mind and
Take my heart.

Take everything
I have to give.
Take me now,
I want to live!

© Copyright 2000 LM - All Rights Reserved
Lil OnE
Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.
1 posted 2000-08-24 05:45 PM



LM... are you trying to make me cry? Cuz if I could, I would have!! I LOVED it!! Thank you SO much. I'm honored to have a poet with the talent you obtain, dedicate one of their priceless works to me.   THANKS AGAIN!!!
((HUGS))


"I've fallen asleep, slept so sound.
Fallen so fast,
I missed the ground"
~Lil OnE~


catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-08-24 06:07 PM


Hi, even though this wasn't for me, I liked it a lot..
catalinamoon

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-24 06:27 PM


Cat  
I'll write something just for you next time, OK?  
Thank you so much for your reply!

Lil One - by all means no! I don't want to make you cry   Check you e-mail hon.

Lil OnE
Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.
4 posted 2000-08-24 06:35 PM


LM...
I just checked my email and theres nothing there from you Try again?


"I've fallen asleep, slept so sound.
Fallen so fast,
I missed the ground"
~Lil OnE~


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