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Lil OnE
Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

0 posted 2000-08-24 02:41 PM


Deep hurt...
hidden fear.
Deep wounds...
anger withheld.
Deep scars...
guilt.
Deep hate...
sadness.
Lost dreams, lost hope.
No confidence lies here.
Lost childhood, lost innocence.
No beauty lies here.
Lost friends, lost pride.
No joy lies here.
Lost days, lost years,
no signs of a real future are here.
Lost love, lost purity,
no life lies here.
Deep hurt,
no hope.
Deep wounds,
no healing.
Deep scars,
no comfort.
Deep hate,
no mercy
or forgiveness.


"I've fallen asleep, slept so sound.
Fallen so fast,
I missed the ground"
~Lil OnE~


© Copyright 2000 Christine L. Kelly - All Rights Reserved
poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-08-24 02:49 PM


this one hurts....every word is very much felt...
honest and beautiful writing from an honest and beautiful poet (dont forget that!)
~Dawn

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-08-24 04:08 PM


Wow... some fatal poem here, liked it a lot!
I like those repeated phrases...
Sorry, can't think of anything interesting to say... I'm kinda drunk now   and my connection is really miserable...
So I'll come back tomorrow  
Take care!

Lil OnE
Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.
3 posted 2000-08-24 04:14 PM


LM...
LMAO!!! You are so funny. DRUNK. I wish I was... but tomorrow is FRIDAY... and there's no school on SATURDAY LOL. Thanks, though!


"I've fallen asleep, slept so sound.
Fallen so fast,
I missed the ground"
~Lil OnE~


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