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Ravenz23 New Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 7 |
Your darkness is so sublime shall I let you penetrate me? Make me your slave and I shall call you master. Fool that you are. I might just play that game for a little while. I'll let you believe that you have broken me. I'll let you think that you have manipulated me. me, this sweet, innocent little girl. Ha! I laugh at you! For in the end you shall see, It was I that played you It was me, yes, nieve little me, that broke you. In the end it was I who stood over you watching you fall to your knees begging me to stay, crying bitter tears, as your life blood splashed onto the floor. While I remained cold and indifferent. and I looked down at you all was dead, and so, I spat in your face, turned.. and walked away. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
very strong emotion here! power can be a merciless weapon, so use it with care! i enjoyed this very much, very impressed. ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
There is real pain to this and very strong feelings ... I liked it! Take care! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Powerful poem. Hope it's not real!  Be well. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Sweet innocent girls scare me. You see, bad girls don’t hide there true self and are honest. It’s the “Sweet and Innocent” ones you have to worry about, for their motives are concealed behind a mask of preconception. Ok, enough paranoia for one day. Are the references to BSDM figurative or literal? Well, at any rate it was a good read, full of dark passions (Hmm, coincidence? I think not) Thank you for taking time to disturb me. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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