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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
An orchestra inside my heart Like hundred drums that beam so loud. The rhythm echos in my gut My stomack turns, another gasp For air, deep breath and once again Someone is messing with my brain. Is this excitement? Maybe fear? The day I see you's comming near... I know this feeling all too well Each meeting is a blissful hell. "Out of sight and out of heart" Never worked right from the start. But seeing you, will this be wise? My feelings so disorganised. Tomorrow comes, I still don't know I shouldn't yet somehow I go Towards dissapointement, once again Unable yet to break the chains. What am I doing? It's insane! It's time to end this vicious game Addicted, craving golden medal This game won't end, it's missing levels. To win means trade my love for hate But hating you for sure I can't. You are the one whom I adore The game continues... What's the score? |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
LM "Unable to break the chains" It sounds like your "lost in love" as an old song was said. Find a way out, look for that torch in your soul to cut those chains. This way you'll be ahead of the game. Garfield |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
LM we have SO much in common. Email me ANYTIME if you need to talk, or even if you just want to say hi. This was a piece that ripped at my heart, the wounds don't heal. They haven't even begun to fade. I hope you win this game... I wonder what the score is in mine? lol. Keep your head up, hun.  ((HUGS)) Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks for understanding and the kind words ggrn3 Lil One: Thanks a LOT! I was really happy you liked it so much, and thanks for your offer, I'd gladly chat with you coz your poems touch me so much as well |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Intensely felt, profound words. catalinamoon |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi LM, I would say this is a game of taking only I hate these kind of games and you know what the games do not get any better as time goes on if you don't stop them now take it from me, lots of luck. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It is a game indeed, but participating is a sweet torture only the strong can turn from, most of us are too weak to make the break!! Yes it can be addicting, but a game such as this, can be dangerous to play!! Excuse me I'll get off my soapbox now!! LOL Great profound writing here good on ya! *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Cerenity, thank you very much on your comment... Isis: Hallelujah! I didn't know what to do to get your or Christopher's attention... Thank you for reading my stuff, means a lot to me |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
written with style, Lm...I thoroughly admire this work. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
LM, intense read, really enjoyed the poem. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Relationships can be quite intense sometimes...especially if we fall for someone that perhaps is not a match...James |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks guys, Sonjes,Brian, James! Means so much to me , it's very personal stuff Btw, no relationship here, not even hope for having one, that's the problem... |
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