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Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
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washing DC

0 posted 2000-08-24 12:39 PM


You lived in my house
When I was little.
yourself eight years older than I
what you did, unspeakable to me.
even to this day.
Then the day came,
My mom broke up with your dad
with whom you took flight,
All the way to South America
to forget your crimes
or maybe to sin again.

Cute, really cute.

Guess who never forgot.
Soon I'll be flying to Brazil.
as a tourist,
or maybe just to see you.
In the city of Rio
I'll see you soon.

Now that I'm all grown up,
We'll see what's up.
You'd better hope Brazil has hardened you
I know I'll make my getaway
Nobody will mourn your passing.

© Copyright 2000 Jose Marti - All Rights Reserved
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 137
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1 posted 2000-08-24 12:44 PM


Ah yes, Vengeance. Sweet as nectar, yet cold and ruthless as a blizzard- If you know how to do it right.
Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
2 posted 2000-08-24 12:29 PM


Thanks for reading my poem barry. I'm glad that you empathize with me.
ggrn3
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
3 posted 2000-08-24 01:02 PM


Jose
  Vengence, it's often sweet.  Sounds like you had a traumatic experience with this other person and your are hell bent on repaying them in full for what they inflicted upon you.  My suggestion.  Be careful as can be.  You may be unfamiliar with the laws in this other country.  Adhere to what I've said, you could come back with a caning like that Michael kid did.

Garfield

Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
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washing DC
4 posted 2000-08-25 01:29 AM


I know this much about Latin American legal systems:

1: They are corrupt as hell.
2: They are reluctant to arrest tourists and give themselves a bad reputation internationally
3: with enough US dollars, you can bribe your  way out of any situation.

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