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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-08-23 11:23 AM


Not only passion do I need,
a friend, some love, a man who heeds.

Someone who cares about my heart,
a man who hates our time apart.

A bit of romance is acceptable,
sweet words and candles on the table.

If he's developed listeniing skills,
all for the best, he fits the bill.

Passion comes so free to men,
as for the rest, not one in ten.

So still I seek the perfect one,
"I love you" will not make him run.

'Till then, just passion can be had.
For wasted time, it's not so bad.

© Copyright 2000 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Beenie
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 27
WVa
1 posted 2000-08-23 11:59 AM


Passion is definately NOT a wasted emotion. But I do understand the longng for more.... Great poem!!


Beenie

Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas
2 posted 2000-08-23 02:37 PM


Sandra....A nice one indeed!  Unfortunate but too true.

Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-08-23 03:02 PM


Very interesting cat...I don't want a woman that says she likes me or loves me and has no action to back up her words...I want a woman that wants and needs me and demands lots of my time and attention...of course it has to be the right one...James
sonjes
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since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-08-23 03:13 PM


These words ring all too true for so many...you speak hear, but sometimes I think maybe just passion is wasted time when you are needing so much more.  

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

5 posted 2000-08-24 02:57 AM


        

Awesome! But Passion without love is like summer without heat...

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2000-08-24 04:41 PM


I do believe you're developing a fan, here, cat...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
7 posted 2000-08-24 05:09 PM


Great poem cat, need I mention that! There are other men though, I swear!  

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



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