darkness, sin, sadness, fault

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Dark Poetry #2

darkness, sin, sadness, fault

moshpit
Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 143
cebu, philippines

0 posted 2000-08-23 08:44 AM

I am darkness.
I blacken everything I touch.

I am sin.
I stain people's lives.

I am sadness.
I weep at your celebrations.

I am fault.
The blame is all on me.

But you,
You were loved.

[This message has been edited by moshpit (edited 08-23-2000).]

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-08-23 10:15 AM

this was very touching, though short the words are very powerful, great poem

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-08-23 11:11 AM

Aww, I bet you are not all that bad.

Very strong words. Take care
catalinamoon

MiseryDivine
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

3 posted 2000-08-23 04:26 PM

oh how sad...dont say that! i bet you're great..dont lie now....the last line was cute...nice poem moshpit.smile hun

All i want in life is to be happy
It seems to me
How messed up things can be
Everytime i get ahead
I fell more dead
~KoRn~~

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