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Trisha4_u
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 28


0 posted 2000-08-23 01:32 AM


You say I should not love you for our skin has never touched  You tell me don't say that for  It doesn't mean to much! Words on your screen.... you say is all I am.

Well I do love you My Handsome far away friend
Ive seen your thoughts,your wants and Desires.
We have set this screen on Raging fire.
You have shown  me you care by tearing me apart,
Only to come back to show me the softness in your heart.

Disappointment is  Not my game,
but i seem to deliver it just the same.
I live here and you live there....
who says Im not suposed to care
about a man ive come to know!

That makes me smile and Lets my eyes shine with a glow. You say there are many girly fishes in the sea. Too bad it wont be you ! Who is the one with me? Dont you know I am with you!

In your heart and your mind you fool!
What we share won't go away for mearly words...
ahhhhh I do not say ,,for the bond that formed
is a special gift that I will hold  close to my lips as i whisper thoughts of Good night.

Sleep well and talk to you soon , I will smile and say "Ahhh what a guy... too bad he ain't mine for all of the time"  but to think...What he  does share is good enough for Me and what he gave me  turned into a magical feeling.
Making me feel so free.  

Thank you ....For letting me be me.

CMMcN61 8-22-2000 10pm pst.

(posted for my sister)


© Copyright 2000 T.McGrann - All Rights Reserved
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-08-23 06:27 AM


"Thank you ....For letting me be me."

-- how important this is!  Glad the woman in the poem found something out of the online encounter  

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-08-24 02:43 AM


What a great way to describe an *on line* relationship . It is very tough, we're not quite the same on the internet and in real life, take it from me, I know this perfectly.
ggrn3
Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
3 posted 2000-08-24 12:51 PM


Trisha4_u
  Interesting way to describe this relationship.  As we all know, long distance relationships hardly ever work out.  Maybe by continuing to communicate by computer (email) you can develop a lasting friendship with this other person, which does not have to become physical.  But who am I to say, because I had a long distance relationship before.  But I had met the person face to face before becoming involved. Utimately, it's your choice.

Garfield

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