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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Freak Show curled in a bed no light shining anymore I think I might be dead am I really? no hope, no future, nothing just feelings I start to cry I pinch myself not dreaming I sigh I wish I was I can't deal anymore because? I don't know want to put an end to this freak show [This message has been edited by darkstar (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Interesting...sometimes I feel that way about life when I start downing myself...but then I usually find that die hard element that I have within...hope  nice poem, and stay strong  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
I'll try...but I don't know if I can. Dark Star |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Dark Star... obviously a lot of pain is expressed in your poem, which is real sad. But just every minute, every second is a new hope, a new future... 'cause you're still thinking Take care.~ Tara ~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Just remember that we care and I believe writing your feelings helps you too. I know it helps me just to open up and pour out my soul. I am persuaded that things get better, never give up. |
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