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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-08-22 01:59 AM




Tearing of the time cloth,
Exposes the nakedness of our universe,
Foretold in time the words following this verse,

Shades of nature,
Reflecting back the signs of torture,
Left behind are craters of sins.
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Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).


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1 posted 2000-08-22 04:15 PM


I really don't know what to say...it's just like, "Wow".  

                             Angel


I wish you could hear
the child that cries
in my flesh and makes
my bones ache
-Jewel

~*Angel of Darkness*~


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Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
2 posted 2000-08-22 11:27 PM


wow....me too...so deep...very good!i like it i do!

All i want in life is to be happy
It seems to me
How messed up things can be
Everytime i get ahead
I fell more dead
~KoRn~~

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Dehradun
3 posted 2000-08-23 02:38 AM


Indeed very reflective reflections - saying worlds in few words. Well Done
Deepak


Xeonox
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4 posted 2000-08-24 01:33 AM


I try my best to say the right things. You know keep it short and sweet. Right to the point.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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5 posted 2000-08-24 08:32 AM


Xeonox, there is beauty in brevity. The images you created are vivid. I enjoyed this  ....chanson
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6 posted 2000-08-24 04:19 PM


Hi Xeonox,

I toss a long stem red rose your way, this is so beautiful and full of wisdom, very much enjoyed, a keeper for sure.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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7 posted 2000-08-24 10:12 PM


Never been tossed a rose before (even if it is a virtual one), LOL . Thanks  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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