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darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

0 posted 2000-08-21 05:09 PM


Beat Me

Pull my hair
Throw a chair
Slap my cheek
Push me down
Yell at me
Twist my arm
Do more harm
Kick me
Hit me
Beat me
Bring out the wooden spoon
It’ll all be over soon
Just a little more pain
Hit my head again
Mom please stop!
I’ve had enough
I’ll be good now
Some way
Some how
Daddy please no more!
Everything is sore
I’ll be a good girl
In a corner I’ll curl
I’ll cry, I’ll sigh
But my head still held high



© Copyright 2000 Danielle Zumstein - All Rights Reserved
Lil OnE
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since 1999-12-14
Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.
1 posted 2000-08-21 05:23 PM


Oooh... I feel the pain in this one, and relate all too well. You've succeeded in bringing back a flood of memories... WONDERFULLY written poem.   Oh... and check your email, ok? ((HUGS))

Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken.
~Lil OnE~



darkstar
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
2 posted 2000-08-21 09:28 PM


Thanks Lil OnE...

Dark Star

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-08-21 10:13 PM


I know how this all feels kid, many years ago.

And yes still heald high.

Keep up the work. and let the word out.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
4 posted 2000-08-22 04:47 AM


hey darkstar! beautiful poem, sad subject... but I know what you're talking about...
and btw, I decided to post the poem...wondering if it's still here in a couple days...

love, Virgin Suïcide...


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

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