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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-08-21 04:32 PM


   My river ran dry so
  Now i die, slowly cry
        But why?
Death coming closer almost
  In my grasp and with
A mirrored reflection it
Breaks the glass. shattered
Pictures all pieces of me
Unable to be fixed because
The force my mirror was
       Hit with.


I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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monique
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
1 posted 2000-08-21 08:01 PM


You can make beautiful design
With broken mirror pieces
Weeping-Willow

Many years ago I visited
Sarnia, Ontario, Canada
And they had the most beautiful weeping-willows

monique

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since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764
CA, USA
2 posted 2000-08-22 02:04 AM


Your talent is unheard of my friend. You have such a great imagination.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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