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Dedreia
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since 2000-07-10
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0 posted 2000-08-20 10:51 PM


Another days plans foiled,
I wonder what it means?
Are we supposed to do this,
Or is this a warning?
We tried for not one day but two
And as the first one,
this one was spoiled too.
Should we wait and try again,
Or simply give up and give in?

"It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen

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1 posted 2000-08-21 12:57 PM


Great little poem. Even I do not know the answer.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

LOTR
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since 2000-07-31
Posts 68
New Jersey
2 posted 2000-08-21 01:49 AM


Graet little poem. Don't give up, what's meant to happen will.
              : )


Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-21 04:23 AM


I liked it a lot, my situation exactly...
Don't know if you should give up, I'm pondering about this myself...

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2000-08-21 06:42 AM


Don't give up third time's the charm. Great little poem here.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

catalinamoon
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5 posted 2000-08-21 09:52 PM


Oh Dee, its a nightly thing for me, trying and failing to catch that moment. Keep trying, is my vote.
Sandra

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