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What Do You See?????
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What Do You See????? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Open the lid on this MY Pandora's Box, And tell me what you see? A life dissolving as you watch? A spirit so beautiful yearning to be free? Tell me what do you see? A little girl still recovering? For my new found Daddy told such a lie? A little blue eyed girl to ashamed to cry? Tell me what do you see? A caring and loving Mother? One who'd give her very life for her son? Or someone slowly coming undone? Tell me what do you see? A shadow of my former self? Brow beaten and emotionally abused? With no hope, no way out of this ruse? Tell me what do you see? Someone who's hope is unwavering? Or someone at the end of the line? Almost too afraid to hope this time? Tell me what do you see? A woman with spirit, loving and grace? With golden hair, blue eyes and a half decent face? Or merely another pathetic angel fallen from grace? You may see this and so much more, I don't know what it is I portray, So tell me what do you see? Or do you simply turn the other way? *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Isis,...whenever I think of you,...I think of yellow. A soft yellow. Honestly, I do. To me the yellow is sunshine and I know that I don't know your whole story but all that I do know of you I truly admire. You are a strong and beautiful person and I really, really wish that you aren't too afraid to hope this time. You said it yourself,...the only way to go is UP! I love this poem and it's reflection. Wonderful work. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Spitfire!! That is really interesting, you think of yellow when you think of me?? Blue is me, not yellow!! But yellow is second to blue for peace and harmoney colours so you may be right!!! I am not depressed as you thought, just reflective!!  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'll tell you what I see. . . I see a wonderful person, a kind and loving mother, and a warm, caring friend. . . Someone who I'm proud to call a friend. . . and someone who I'm honored to call my kindred. . . That's what I see Isis. . . and I always have. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lovely poem here, Isis... A caring soul, a lovely beautiful mother... that's what I see here... and divine personality too... regards, sudhir. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I'll tell you what I see, I see a mother with compassion who is not afraid to reach out and touch others to bring about healing. A woman who shows the joy in giving through friendship and who radiates hope even when the night is darkest. I also see Isis goddess of the dawn. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Isis, this is what I see A woman with spirit, loving and grace? With golden hair, blue eyes and a half decent face? Carry on, my friend, your spirit is strong and beautiful Sandra |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks my friends!!! I wasn't searching or asking for compliments, yet, I was touched and *embarrassed* to read your caring responses, thanks so much. Sudhir Lyer I thankyou for the comment about a divine personality, what led you to that conclusion? Sven our kindred friendship is very special, and I'm glad you now and see the real me, sometimes all people see is the anger or hurt. Kethry, your response is almost poetic, thankyou, Isis Goddess of the Dawn, hope for a new day, I like that! Cat thanks, it's nice to hear people can see my spirit and value it for what it is.. < !signature-->*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Just moving a copy of this to my library *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I see a caring woman using some of her gifts to the full potential and looking for opportunities to develop other talents when time and conditions allow...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Had to come back to reply... Isis, "A spirit so beautiful yearning to be free?" .. "Someone who's hope is unwavering?" .. "A woman with spirit, loving and grace?" .. .. undoubtedly divine...  ...and I have been reading your many other poems as well to add to my conclusion regards, sudhir |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
James thanks my friend, I'm always so glad you drop by Sudhir thankyou but Kuan Yin I'm not!!! But I appreciate the thought, thanks *hugs* *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
my sweet sister, *hugs* this poem looks like it would come from my mind. i love it and added it to my library as well. what i see in my sis?? hmmm a sweet, loving, caring, nuturing, beautiful, i could go on forever. you truly are my soulmate hun. i really like this part of the poem.Tell me what do you see? A woman with spirit, loving and grace? With golden hair, blue eyes and a half decent face? Or merely another pathetic angel fallen from grace? hey i thought i was the broken angel in the family??? well ok you are an angel too. but not a fallen one. you are my angel that has kept me alive threw many a dark night with wanda. thank you. well i should end this before my reply is longer then your poem. i love you sis always your baby bro jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Jesse! Perhaps we are a family of fallen angels???? LOL As for the help throughout the Wanda thing, I'm here anytime for you, always *hugs* *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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