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darkstar
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

0 posted 2000-08-20 07:33 PM


No More

No more thinking
So negatively
No more injuries
No more lies
No more depression
No more repression
No more fear
No more tears
All these things
Are dreams that I have
Want to be normal
To no longer be sad
But they remain
To be dreams
Everything means nothing
And nothing is as it seems



[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 08-20-2000).]

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-08-20 08:48 PM


Dark Star hope you understand why I had to change those two words...  The poem is so sad hon, I hope you find something positive and to be happy about soon.  I think poetry is one, that is something to be grateful for that you can do..  I don't believe anyone is as bad AS THEY THINK they are!!  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-08-20 09:47 PM


this is absolutely magical in it's words and format
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