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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-08-20 10:06 AM


MISSING YOU

If you're gonna be gone an eternity,
then let an eternity be gone.
Let tomorrow start the end of time,
for an eternity is far too long.

I need you now more than ever,
you make me feel so good.
I need you now. Where are you?
I know you'd come back if you could.

The days seem to be getting darker,
without you here to make them bright.
Yet when I talk to you,
you let me know that it's alright.

I haven't seen you in a while,
& that makes me miss you even more.
I try not to think about you,
but I can't forget the one I adore.

I Love Keith!

LOVE ELMO
<3



© Copyright 2000 ¢¾ KT ¢¾ - All Rights Reserved
darkstar
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
1 posted 2000-08-20 11:23 AM


It's good that you found someone you love. Really good poem.

Dark Star

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

2 posted 2000-08-20 04:29 PM


Oh... I kinda feel like this right now...
But I really messed up, it's my fault and now I miss him... I told him and I saw a little spark of hope he'll forgive me...
Look at me, ranting about my problems here, but it's coz your poem moved me so much... thanks!

Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
3 posted 2000-08-20 04:42 PM


yeah it's just great elmo!! know the feeling..

love, Virgin Suïcide...


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-08-21 02:44 AM


elmo~~~i love this..you should have posted it in the teen forum..2 thumbs up for you girl!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


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