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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-08-20 03:01 AM


Today my mind arrives with a thought laid,

Establishment of devil places viciousness at bay,

Shaking the foundation of the very life,

Exemplifying the levels of my strife,

Heaving the load on ancient thighs,

To what ends do I bring such lies?



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
silentsky
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1 posted 2000-08-20 05:26 AM


i like this poem a lot...
it makes me think
thanks,
kat

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2 posted 2000-08-20 12:55 PM


I know many of you might not reply to my poems in here because they are plain weird and I understand that. Thank you for readin them though.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

SpitFire
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3 posted 2000-08-20 06:59 PM


~C'mon X,...they are not wierd....they are dang interesting to me! I always enjoy reading your work. Including this one. It's heavy. It's an expression I find well worth my time to read. Please keep 'em coming. Take care now. *Peace.
Paula Finn
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4 posted 2000-08-20 11:49 PM


well you already know what I think but I will say it here...this is awesome in its simplicity...amazing in its depth...great write my friend
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