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Member

since 2000-08-12

Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)

0 posted 2000-08-20 02:34 AM

Fallen from grace,
From the righteous way.
Nothing I can do now,
Nothing I can say.

Unforgiven am I,
Never again to know pleasure.
Only the pain of eternal punishment,
Beyond all human measure.

Downward I'm forced,
Falling to my eventual fate.
My fiery oblivion...my destiny,
As a sacrifice to Hell's Gate.

Another angel fallen,
And punished just as well.
My soul to die many painful deaths at once,
Among the world of darkness and misery called Hell.

-"Death is the servant of the righteous."

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-08-20 02:53 AM

Superb poem. Just awesome. Each lines has capture me and has be spell binder.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

2 posted 2000-08-20 06:09 AM

Whoooooohaaaaaaaaa!!!
Yes! Awesome!

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2000-08-20 09:41 AM

Hi !!!,

Awesomely Hot work here,

Downward I'm forced,
Falling to my eventual fate.
My fiery oblivion...my destiny,
As a sacrifice to Hell's Gate.

This is how I feel so much of the time,

What's this place you speak of "its hell my minds eye"

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

boji stone
Member

since 2000-08-13

Posts 62
USA

4 posted 2000-08-20 10:01 AM

wow, this is intense!
I hope it's just writing,
everyone deserves forgiveness,
regardless,

good job!

bj

~the breath, a mystery
of it's own ~~

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

5 posted 2000-08-20 11:37 AM

Wow...great writing.

Dark Star

!!!
Member

since 2000-08-12

Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)

6 posted 2000-08-20 06:03 PM

Thank you for all your responses, they were fun to read. And dont worry, this is just writing, folks.

JnR4eva
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 377
Bronx, NY

7 posted 2000-08-21 02:22 AM

Ouch...remarkable poem but..Ouch such words

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me

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