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silentsky
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since 2000-08-09
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0 posted 2000-08-20 02:20 AM


there's a hole in my gut
the size of the pacific
with waves that roll over me like dough

that eternal longing for the non-existent

ive been known on occasion
to take the plunge
but never have i reached
the bottom.


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1 posted 2000-08-20 02:57 AM


great work, short but thought provoking.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

lotharingia
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2 posted 2000-08-21 04:22 AM


Wow, silentsky, brilliant piece. The abyss can be magnetic, can it not?< !signature-->

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo




[This message has been edited by lotharingia (edited 08-21-2000).]

LM
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3 posted 2000-08-21 04:26 AM


Ahhh.... i liked it A LOT!
Sounds like a famous quote  

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