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Feelings (Repost for CatalinaMoon)
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Feelings (Repost for CatalinaMoon) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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How can I describe it? This meeting of the minds? An awkward moment, a stolen glance, A shred of happiness to find. A diversion from the everyday Laughter shared, a walk down memory lane, All problems seems so far away, Happiness again, no quarrels, no pain. But can these feelings last? Are they real or a dalliance? Seeking something from one another, Should we give these feelings a chance? It's all so new this thing between us like a newborn doe, Or perhaps dawn's first rays of light? It's kind of overwhelming too, But God it feels so right. Do we give into these feelings, these memories? Or should they be put back on the shelf? To be dusted off and remembered, When I'm all by myself? This thing between us is oh so fragile, Like a flower teased open by the sunlight, Only time will tell if our feelings are real, And not a phantom in the night. *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Isis, this is just another side of the same subject, and you know I am there..I keep on hoping, how about you? Thanks for reposting for me hon.. Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Janie Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 158 |
I always love to read rhyme that is so unforced that I actually have to check to see if it was rhyme at all. When I see that it is rhyme, then I know it was just very well written. Janie |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Indeed this was well written. . . now, and the last time that I read it. . . Superb as always my kindred. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Glad you liked it guys!!!  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit |
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