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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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0 posted 2000-08-19 10:07 AM


Love’s Realm Never Conquered  


Is anyone truly in control of loves gate?
I bid not for if there were one who were
then this never ending question would
of died off long ago.

But the desire to strive to find that in
which is not obtainable was put there
by the masters  to watch in gitty’ness all
who try to conquer such a lost quest as
this one.

Who shall it be to win the favor of the
masters and solve the riddle love has
held unchangeable since time began.
Oh the mighty and so too the weak try
to beat it but not a budged did there
efforts see.

Given in the beginning and shall never
show reward to the end this desire to
conquer loves realm is for the truly love
stricken souls that do not see the depths
of their own worthiness, but this is were
lies the question but false the answers  they
will get, for to find loves realm is to look
with in yourself in contentment.

Yes with glee many try and much do they
learn if they don’t give way to doubt and
misery but find wisdom in their trials it  
  will be worth there weight in raptured
  ecstasy.


By,   Cerenity        



"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

1 posted 2000-08-19 12:14 PM


That's deep...
You can give lectures about it  
thanks for your comment on my work  

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-08-19 06:49 PM


Cerenity, this is a great thesis subject. "Worth their weight in raptured ecstacy" A wonderful last line. I love this, and have many a night dwelled on these thoughts.
Sandra


Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2000-08-20 01:11 AM


Hi LM and Sandra,

Thank you for you thoughful replys, yep I can talk but doing the walk can be another thing, love sweet love what would we do with out it (don't ask me) hehe

Love ya both,

Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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