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carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
Posts 142


0 posted 2000-08-19 04:01 AM





I have two burnt stix in my mouth
I can bite down deeply
I might've had breakfast
I just had, and I wished
Screwing up is never quite the same
the very same deamons call to me
and I fold
1 watch as the people, voices
are silenced
have we kept eachother
have we been looking for the other
-Edited- by the one
she's the only one, but can we be sure
she said, he told, and we sold
can we be
we have sold ourselves
arizona has some shelves
i never once said i will be, and i have felt
cries, tried, pain, and what do we feel
they've tried, cried, and lost it all
as the train whales, as it tries, he sleeps, and a little part of me dies
does anybody know how we came to be, and be here
within the ****, will we love the scared
will we love the done
could we chance what was begun


J.L. Koehler

© Copyright 2000 J.L. Koehler - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-08-19 11:22 PM


Strong emotions, the ending particularly hit me.  Take care.

Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

LOTR
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since 2000-07-31
Posts 68
New Jersey
2 posted 2000-08-20 03:22 AM


Very deep, gave me a chill with its ending.

Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find

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