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T.Rose
Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 20


0 posted 2000-08-18 03:24 AM



Sky Catcher

I hear a sweet little red robin,
And she sings a happy tune.

I see a strong proud hoot owl,
And she flies high by the glow of the moon.

I see a nesting snow white dove,
And she is priming her soft feathery breast.

I see the old grey alley cat,
And she has put them all to rest.


                       Theresa Rose
                          



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lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
1 posted 2000-08-18 04:14 AM


This is sad, and  beautiful. Though I do love cats!  

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-08-18 05:40 AM


Thank you for Sky Catcher, this poem made me laugh.
Good job on the unexpected ending.

Be well
Kethry< !signature-->

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-


[This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 08-18-2000).]

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-08-19 01:41 PM


~Hi there T. Rose,...this sounds like it could be in a children's story book. Great work. Maybe a bit graphic for them (children) but still it's nature and it is what goes on. Nice verses. Love the title for this. Take care now. *Peace.
darkstar
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
4 posted 2000-08-19 01:50 PM


That's a really cool poem...I liked it a lot.

Dark Star

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

5 posted 2000-08-19 01:55 PM


Hehehe  
Funny, and cool title too!

Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

6 posted 2000-08-19 04:49 PM


So cute, love this one.  
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