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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
What am I doing with my life Everytime . . . EVERY TIME My blood freezes, my tongue hides No encouragement has ever helped No matter the situtation Nor the chances For as the chances near So do my fears I watch as they arrive Hide as they stay Struggle when they go In the end all i can do is to wonder What am I doing with my life There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey bae ... so much emotion here my friend ... your angst and frustration drip from it... may I say..the point is ...you are a poet by the gift of your poetry and words -- you always have a voice and reason... as long as you write...you heal take care kind poet jm |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Same here my friend, same here... Really great expression, take care! |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
So many times I have wondered the same. Thank you for a good morning read. Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Thanks jm, but sometimes having what it takes to be a poet is beyond what I want to expirence. Maybe someday I'll be able to change the tone of the things I write ... someday. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
you have toned the pen. Great read baerlon, SO many times we have all felt the same way, you just brought these words to life. Thank you |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Hey, it's just great your poem! but I don't think that a lot of people really know what to do with their lives, so you're not the only one... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
The part that went, "So do my fears. I watch as they arrive hide as they stay struggle when they go" Allow me to just say, "WOW". Awesome read, baerlon!! I LOVED IT!!!  I am in the same boat, no clue as to what I'm doing here, but hopefully, we'll all get through it... together. ((HUGS))Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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