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Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA

0 posted 2000-08-17 08:38 PM




I met her walking down that path,
that we all do share,
I asked if we could talk awhile,
or until we arived down there.

She asked how far am I going?
I lied "just a little way."
I could see she knew the truth,
and had no more to say.

She smiled at me and said,
"I knew you once before"
I took her hand and shouted,
"This time it's 'evermore!"

She just pulled her hand away,
and walked on up ahead.
"Can't you just leave me alone?"
"You know I'm already dead."

I gave to her my word of faith,
with all my heart a token.
I asked of her the promise,
I knew could not be broken.

"You know you can't go with me.",
"so turn and go back home."
"This is something I must to do,"
"and I have do it on my own."

So I turned and walking back,
to where the path did start.
Walked toward that end by myself,
a man without a heart.


Click


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taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-08-17 09:15 PM


Awww Click.... terrific    I was waiting for the happy ending! *sigh*
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-08-18 07:41 AM


Sob, so sad Click.
Be well
Keth.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

3 posted 2000-08-18 06:01 PM


Click~~Very nice poem, but oh so sad...I hope You find happiness again soon. Give L. a hug from me. Take care friend.

          ~Sash~

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

4 posted 2000-08-18 06:11 PM


:~
uuuuuuhhhhh.....

Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
5 posted 2000-08-19 11:23 AM


Click,

This is sad yes, But awesome poetry, you really can express your self through writing.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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