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Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-08-17 05:51 AM



Please look at me
and say I'm sweet
Please look at me
and say I'm pretty
Please look at me
and say you love me
Please look at me
and say you care

Just look at me
and say you need me
When I look at you
I know I do
I know
I want you
I need you
I love you
I care

Hold me
and never let me go again
Just like all the others did
after a while
When I finally had some rest
don't let me fall
Down



"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

© Copyright 2000 Virgin Suïcide - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-08-17 06:03 AM


Virgin,
you are pretty and sweet and your poetry rocks.
Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
2 posted 2000-08-17 06:23 AM


hehe....yeah just want someone right know who really means it or so, and won't let me down....that would be nice sometime....I guess...

Love, Virgin Suïcide


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

3 posted 2000-08-17 06:44 PM


Hey! Nice poem, very sad though. Keep up the good work!  
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
4 posted 2000-08-18 07:44 AM


Thanks to both of you...

love, Virgin Suïcide...


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
5 posted 2000-08-18 10:14 AM


Wow!! Good write!!!  I liked how it looked and read.....I really like what it says to me...I feel it.
   Thanks to you!!

Click


darkstar
Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
6 posted 2000-08-18 04:19 PM


I really liked it...I felt like that so many times that I lost count...

Dark Star


Lil OnE
Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.
7 posted 2000-08-18 04:39 PM


I am with all the others on this one. I felt it. It hit me, because I feel the same. And it was an awesome poem. ((HUGS))

Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken.
~Lil OnE~



LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

8 posted 2000-08-18 06:08 PM


Please look at me and notice my existance...
I know what it's like, touched me deep inside.  

Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
9 posted 2000-08-19 03:14 AM


Thank you guys again (hehe...)!
I really appreciate all your comments and your loving words and I'm glad that I've finaly let others read my "poetry"...

love, Virgin Suïcide...



"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

LOTR
Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68
New Jersey
10 posted 2000-08-20 03:36 AM


Very strong piece! Went through most of my life feeling this way. Thanks : )

Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find

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