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MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
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0 posted 2000-08-16 02:58 PM

Magnetism

She draws her strength from you.
Like the magnetic fibers
in an etch a sketch,
she feels the pull of your thoughts,
as they glide over her body
from visions of blue.
Tightness, she experiences,
as the attraction has her clinging,
awaiting every breath, to rise from within,
her every sense, made aware of yours.

You have pictured her,
in dress of your eyes,
pedestaled before you...
holding onto each fiber of her being
for fear of letting go
of even one small piece,
will leave you an unfinished canvas,
unable to hold it's form
to slowly dissolve
into nothingness.

Working feverishly
to complete this arresting puzzle,
you seize upon the one thing
that keeps you returning
and keeps her willing.
You, like her, are drawn to heart.
She like you, to lips of caress.
Both to linger in the eyes of love,
held in the grasp of
the Moon's magnetic pull.

MM
8*2k

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-17-2000).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-08-16 05:26 PM

Maureen, this is superb. I feel this like it was my life, again.. Lovely writing, subject close to my heart.
cat...

Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

2 posted 2000-08-17 12:55 PM

Maureen... you amaze me sometimes with how you can put together words in such a beautiful fashion. Touching, heartfelt, hard hitting and lovely

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
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3 posted 2000-08-18 02:12 AM

cat
I think many of us share the same sadnesses and happinesses in life..it's a smaller world than we think
~~soft smiles and hugs
Maureen

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2000-08-18 07:10 AM

Maureen, you did it again. You softly stole my breath away as I was reading your lovely, lovely, poem.
Be well
Keth.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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5 posted 2000-08-18 07:51 AM

ThUnDeRkYsS

what a kYsS that was, from you
~~soft thanks

M

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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6 posted 2000-08-22 12:45 PM

Keth

I appreciate you visits and comments ...they bring a smile to my face

~~soft hugs
Maureen

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

7 posted 2000-08-22 06:12 PM

Maureen, a stunning poem. amazing imagery,

"Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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8 posted 2000-08-22 06:36 PM

brian ..well I had to reread...when you say stunning I have to see for myself..

thank you, Brian
~~soft smiles
Maureen

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