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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2000-08-16 02:33 PM


Ivy strangling the stone
encasing the aging dust and bone,
time invading the sculpted words
silenced up the wings of soul baring birds
earth regrown
to cover the opened moan,
tears shed upon the soil
of one shrouded in black veil,
and angles steadfast upon their silent throne
Guardians of the tomb.



"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

© Copyright 2000 a-alibaster (H.A.R.) - All Rights Reserved
bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-08-17 08:03 PM


beatiful descriptions
very nice poem
blue

Wren
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

2 posted 2000-08-17 08:09 PM


Nice one! Very dark, very descriptive!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-08-18 08:02 AM


Dark poem, very neat
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

4 posted 2000-08-18 09:53 AM


Thank you all, I think maybe this one needs a bit of work, maybe I will repost after. I am honoured by your kind and accepting words.
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

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