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a-alibaster
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0 posted 2000-08-16 01:44 PM


Darkness is my freedom
drenched in moon-lit mist,
tattered lace veils adding a hypnotic twist.
Join me there
to experience things beyond compare...
shadows frantically swaying too and fro,
the air moaning vivid colors soft and low
as sorrow whispers sweet vindication
with haunting satisfaction.
Enter my precious kingdom of despair...
I dance wickedly in this
silent abyss.



[This message has been edited by a-alibaster (edited 08-16-2000).]

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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-08-16 05:31 PM


Oh yeah, me too! I was just about to work on a poem along these lines. Maybe I will wait a bit  
Love this!
cat....

Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
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2 posted 2000-08-16 06:23 PM


I really like this poem...the imegry is really cool.

Dark Star

a-alibaster
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3 posted 2000-08-16 06:26 PM


I thank you both and am glad that you enjoyed.
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Isis
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Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-08-16 07:46 PM


I enjoyed the imagery you portrayed too Ali, I've danced in that same mist a few times myself.  Perhaps I'll catch you there soon!!
Great work  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit

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