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lost hamlet New Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 5 |
In the eye of my previous try My inner temple sighs and The wind between the leaves laughs At my lies that sent beauty Sinking into thin ice, My head roams while my heart Deals with the loss that cost Me the shot into the tumbling Turning time of bliss, In the search of joy I lost to the immortal Reign of happiness’s pain. |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
"I lost to the immortal reighn of happiness's pain" I liked this line a lot!! Great work. Welcome to Passions  ((HUGS)) Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
NICE! welcome to passions. catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
lost hamlet, I enjoyed this very much. Looking forward to more of your work. Welcome to Passions. Juls |
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