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Come Back for More |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Come Back for More You say one thing and then say another You did neither but you'll say you did All this lying still leaves me crying I walk out that door But I come back for more You wanted one thing And one thing only I was desperate and very lonely I knew how it was going in The water was over my head And I couldn't swim You tossed me a life raft And then pushed me under And I still wonder Did you ever care? You said you'd be there Or was it just for fun? I should've run I gave in I let you win Am I masochistic? If not that then what is it? I do this every time to get hurt I'm first in line But I still came back for more I still come back for more |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
o my god, this just sounds SO painful....had to read it over again...I can just feel the pain that gets out of it, you know... very beautiful, great writing... love always, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
thanks...it was written when I had a boyfriend that I knew had someone else, but I kept seeing him anyway...I even did some stuff I regret....He even proposed to the other chick after he told me he was gonna break up with her...and that was very painful...but I still didn't break up with him...I still came back for more... Dark Star |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
The water was over my head And I couldn't swim You tossed me a life raft And then pushed me under WOW..I wrote something long ago (one of my first 20 poems) about coming back for more..12*98 BACK FOR MORE... Doesn't it make you wonder, how relationships occur, when you are just on here and chatting, and it all becomes a blurr? It's up and down and back and forth, and takes you for a spin. Can't tell sometimes, if you're coming or going, if you're out or if you're in. There's only one thing that you can feel, no matter what takes place. You've fallen for this person, without even seeing their face! This could be just a game being played. You can't really know for sure. But every day you come again, and even look for more. At times they'll give you what you want, The attention is all yours. And then the next time you're on line, they're shutting all the doors. What makes us do this to ourselves? And does it have to be... never knowing for a second, if you really care for me? What do we want...those of us on here? Are we looking for more than a "friend"? Or are we "lost" and hoping for our loneliness to end? MM |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
DarkStar, this is very very sad and beautiful, I can feel your pain. I hope that it's over already, this experience... LM  |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
I haven't spoken to him in months but the really stupid thing is, I still love him...he was never really good to me...but I still do. He was the one who stopped talking to me. I'll be ok eventually...I think... Dark Star |
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