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Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
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Netherlands

0 posted 2000-08-15 10:20 AM


Close your eyes
And let me take you
To the darkness of eternity
Don’t look back
Take what you can
And see what you´ll do

Don’t mind other thoughts
Think about yourself
Nevermind the people
Be yourself the way you want live
Not the way they want you to do
Ignore the sounds, the thoughts, the looks

Let me guide you
Follow me
Into the light
Open your eyes




"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

© Copyright 2000 Virgin Suïcide - All Rights Reserved
darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
1 posted 2000-08-15 06:33 PM


Really good...I'd let you take me...but I can't ignore the people...  

Dark Star

Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
2 posted 2000-08-16 07:37 AM


heyhey, after a long time you will be able too...first,I couldn't either, but after a long period, I finally could....

love, Virgin Suïcide...


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
3 posted 2000-08-16 05:53 PM


REally enjoyed this one, very good advice,

Don’t mind other thoughts
Think about yourself
Nevermind the people
Be yourself the way you want live
Not the way they want you to do
Ignore the sounds, the thoughts, the looks



"Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis

the applicant
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since 2000-08-16
Posts 8
england
4 posted 2000-08-16 06:01 PM


~virgin,
yeh! the sentiments in this poem were the blood in my veins when i was still in school.
it took me along time to convince myself to Ignore the sounds, the thoughts, the looks
but i managed it.
its a constant battle, and i'd love to come with you.
screw 'em all!

i also love the bleak romanticism in this piece.
< !signature-->

"Is my life so intriguing?
Is it for this you widen your eye-rings?"
~sylvia plath~


[This message has been edited by the applicant (edited 08-16-2000).]

Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
5 posted 2000-08-17 05:42 AM


Thanks to all of you...Well, I managed to ignore it all, but I still haven't seen the light...guess my life is made to be in darkness..

love, Virgin Suïcide...
< !signature-->

"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....


[This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 08-17-2000).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2000-08-17 06:08 AM


Virgin,
even a life in darkness, is better than no life at all. Good poem.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
7 posted 2000-08-17 06:33 AM


guess it is...sometimes....

love, Virgin Suïcide...


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

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