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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-08-14 09:26 PM


Sometimes I see you, and I remember who you were.
I wish for something to spark and for us to be together.
You change moods so quickly, you change masks.
My attraction for you fades and grows with each day.

I'm confused because you sound different.
Your intent isn't to touch me,
You want to save me.
That scares me sometimes, Damn I miss you.

What a freak I can be, just so wierd.
I feel you need someone better to hold,
Someone better than me.
Yet you're so wierd, too, and I'm fated to stay within your sights.
Please comfort me...

*For Chris...I hope he's found his calling, no matter how strange it may seem to me.

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Parker - All Rights Reserved
taramw
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1 posted 2000-08-15 01:20 AM


A very touching poem... Take care.
~ Tara ~

Kethry
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2 posted 2000-08-15 08:16 AM


Interesting concept. Sounds like he joined the priesthood or something. Good poem.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

LM
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3 posted 2000-08-15 09:00 AM


I agree with Kethry, if it's true... so weird to stuble apon this in real life... I thought it's only in the movies and soaps.
Wish you all the best, hope he'll change his mind.

Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2000-08-15 07:02 PM


Actually, we only dated for,like, two days, but we've known each other on and off for something like 3 or 4 years now! He just keeps popping up in my life, and I'm a big believer in fate. Recently, however, he's gone into a youth minister thing, and he's quite adament about not dating till he finds the woman he'll "court and marry" there is some long winded explanation, anyway I applaud him for it, if it's what he wants to do.
Jenn

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