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darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

0 posted 2000-08-14 03:15 PM


Indifference (for Dr Kewlich, Dana, Mrs.Demato, and the faculty of the Harbor)

Their faces never change
Their fake smiles always remain
Tell them all my problems
It doesn’t seem to bother them
“It’ll be ok”
Is all they seem to say
Can’t they see
Happy is something I can’t be
I tried
Still cried
Their smiles frozen there
They do not seem to care
They don’t really know me
They just want to get their fee
They don’t understand
No one offers a helping hand
Don’t want to do this anymore
Will they worry if I don’t come through that door?
No
They’ll still smile
As they walk down the corridor with white tile
Indifference


© Copyright 2000 Danielle Zumstein - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-08-14 04:25 PM


darkstar....

     I'm going to presume that you are
     writing about a school situation
     here...if not, you can correct me.
     There really are a lot of indifferent
     people out there, and you just have
     to keep your mind set on your goals,
     and don't worry about them. It's
     your future, and your life....and
     there are just as many people who are
     ready and willing to support you in
                your efforts!!
     Don't let the indifference knock you
            off your chosen path..    
           BTW.....nice writing here!< !signature-->

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
    'the Present'!




[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-14-2000).]

darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
2 posted 2000-08-14 04:30 PM


No...I'm talking about my experience in a place called the "Harbor"...I was put there because of a suicide attempt...even though it was supposed to help me, it made it worse. Dr. Kewlich is a psychiatrist, Dana was my counsellor, Mrs. Demato was my guidence counsellor at my school...she was and still full offake smiles and fake sympathy...anyways...thanks...just wated to explain.

Dark Star

Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
3 posted 2000-08-14 04:53 PM


I know some persons just pretend like they understand, but just try not to think of them...they'll only make your situation worse. the only people who truly understand are, I guess, the people who have been there themsleves or are still there...so they can help you...I still hope I'm kinda helping you a bit, dunno if I am...but i really want to...

love always, Virgin Suïcide


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
4 posted 2000-08-14 05:14 PM


You are...Thanks...

Dark Star

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