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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i have to find ways to amuse myself these days... ~White Coats~ they come when you go crazy they like to play with your mind their coats of white are glowing synthetic of some kind they see you as ashamed they don't even know your name the white coats are frightning me shoot me up when i go crazy no one will come to save me from the white coats' wrath alone in the room feelings of such doom closing in the walls i can't hide at all why they call it straight this jacket i do hate i have to scream again the white coats coming in they are playing with me sanity no such humanity the white coats have come to play now i'm floating far away Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. [This message has been edited by Nikolette Sadness (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wow NS, an intense read, the always seem to knocking at my door...damn milk men..LOL....no seriously really enjoyed the poem. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Cool...I like it...it's like every scene from a movie that include insane asylums... "Being insane is better than being sane because you can't go insane worrying about being sane" -Dark Star(yeha...a quote from me...) |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
they took all my money adn i didn't even drink the damn milk! i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ROTFLMAO....they dont know it but i have MY own white coat and its their turn next |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
paula you always know how to make me laugh even when i dont want to :P heheh Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Nikolette, Now this was a cool poem.....really enjoyed this one LOL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Nik, there is a really cool song by Joni Mitchell about this, I think you'd like it alot..."Troubled Child" "up in some sterilized room where they let you be spacy... knowing your attitude is wrong, y'gotta change and that's not easy... and, "they open and close you. They talk like they know you-- they don't know you, they're friends and they're foes too-- troubled child, breaking like the waves at Malibu..." Much love to you Nik. Look this song up, I believe it's off of Ladies of the Canyon... and hey, you've just got to be alright, if only because the alternative sucks. Hugs. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
As my friend once said: "It's OK to talk to yourself, it' even OK to answer yourself, but when you start asking "Huh? What did you say?" - that's when the ppl in white coats are comming..."  Hehe... loved it a lot! |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I liked your descriptions in this one. Really to the point. Your images are also quite good and vivid. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Loved the insanity of this poem. How can you still write in that long sleeved coat lol. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
This put a smile on my face...and I hope that does not offend...I am a bit strange at times...lol It reminds me of a very old song called "Their coming to take me away", "their coming to take me away , haha, their coming to take me away, hehe...where I can weave basket every day...Hehe..." Until... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
do you all know what? i want to bring this up because its the funniest thing i have ever done! i lmao when i read it bakc the first time...i think its just hilarious...heheh cuz i'm a lunatic  i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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