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bubbles chan
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0 posted 2000-08-13 12:15 PM


Both sticky and smooth
runs only when it is burned
Wax is fun to chew.

Time and space are not constant, but floating around like the inside of a giant metaphysical lava lamp

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Nikolette Sadness
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1 posted 2000-08-13 12:19 PM


i'm frightened by this i think...and you knwo what they say...people are frightened of the things that make no sense to them...maybe its over my head

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

catalinamoon
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2 posted 2000-08-13 12:31 PM


Interesting, few words. Runs only when its burned..Enlighten us to the exact meaning, if you would. I have my thoughts, but they could be way off.  
catalinamoon

bubbles chan
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3 posted 2000-08-13 12:33 PM


Take it as you wish to, in my mind it was only a haiku about the nature of wax
Kethry
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4 posted 2000-08-13 07:50 AM


Interesting haiku but I'm not sure I agree with the last part unless you don't have any gum. *smiles*
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

SpitFire
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5 posted 2000-08-13 04:48 PM


~Cool One! Hey,...remember those little wax bottles filled with some really nasty warm juice that you drank after you bit the tip off?....Hmmm. Maybe it's just me, but this made me think of that or the wax for my snowboard....ummm,..the wax coating on the very sharp wire holding my kitty's jaw together after he got hit by a car. Hhhm. Thanks, interesting haiku.  Take care. *Peace.
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