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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-08-12 10:06 PM


You turn my life of gray to vibrant rose.
My name, spoken on the air.
Far away, a sigh resonates.
Words fly straight to my heart.
Distance fades.
Your strength flows to me,
an infusion of love.
Your hand stretches across the chasm.
We are not apart-not at all.
Connection of spirit unbroken.
The physical cries to be reunited.
Come...Come...
And so it will be.

© Copyright 2000 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
1 posted 2000-08-12 10:36 PM


That longing to be with that person, and the feeling comes across strong of what you are feeling. Another wonderful expression of emotions!! Great Job!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-08-13 06:26 AM


Come, Come and so it will be.
Cat you've captured something beautiful here.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2000-08-13 01:42 PM


Hi Catalinamoon,

I like this look at the inevitable, the chasm that is between the one I love is vast and I don't know if a solid bridge can be built across the space or if I want to keep trying, I am very close to San Deigo I hope you enjoy it here it has been my home all my life,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-08-13 09:03 PM


~Cat,...the title itself is so much. This poem is like magic. Mmm. Expressed beautifully! Take care S. *Peace.
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