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Goddess of Imperfection

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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone


0 posted 08-12-2000 09:18 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

She cries to be his golden
Goddess.
Tall, proud, perfect
Goddess.
Unashamedly naked
Goddess.
Satin skin and hair of silk
Goddess.
Wine drenched lips, drops of passion
speak his name
Goddess.
Eyes glow with desire,
untouched by time
Goddess.
Rather the Goddess of Imperfection
rises to meet him.
Tentative,
more silver than golden
Goddess.
Love overflows as a marble pitcher too full.
She steps into his arms
the magic touch
transforms.
The Goddess of Imperfection
glows with the golden light
of perfect
love..
© Copyright 2000 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
taramw
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1 posted 08-12-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for taramw   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for taramw

Oh Cat... this is terrific!  

"Love overflows as a marble pitcher too full"
--- great expression!  ~ Tara ~
serenity blaze
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2 posted 08-12-2000 09:31 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is just so touching, words escape me at the moment....but I love the transformation talents of love...applause to you on this, m'friend.
Deborah1
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3 posted 08-12-2000 10:38 PM       View Profile for Deborah1   Email Deborah1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah1

Very descriptive, beautiful imagery as well!! A fine piece here!!! Loved it!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar
LOTR
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New Jersey


4 posted 08-13-2000 01:46 AM       View Profile for LOTR   Email LOTR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit LOTR's Home Page   View IP for LOTR

Another beautiful job Cat, you have a way of saying so much in so few words. Adding this to my favorites for sure.

Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find
moshpit
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5 posted 08-13-2000 03:49 AM       View Profile for moshpit   Email moshpit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moshpit

i believe that as humans we all strive to be perfect.. but when we experience love, we reach perfection anyway because love is perfect.. nice poem, catalinamoon.
LM
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6 posted 08-13-2000 04:52 AM       View Profile for LM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LM

Cat, this is really beautiful, we all want to be just perfect for our loved ones...
Kethry
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since 07-29-2000
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Victoria Australia


7 posted 08-13-2000 05:45 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Cat,
This one just shimmers.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-
kynder
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8 posted 08-26-2000 09:47 PM       View Profile for kynder   Email kynder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kynder

wow moonbeam, this is amazing!! really.  what a masterpiece!!

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson
lotharingia
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since 06-04-2000
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saarbruecken, Germany


9 posted 08-27-2000 04:49 AM       View Profile for lotharingia   Email lotharingia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit lotharingia's Home Page   View IP for lotharingia

Beautiful, beautiful poem, Cat. I hold that imperfection is far more exciting than perfection anyway!  

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo


brian madden
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10 posted 08-27-2000 07:32 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

WOW Cat, an stunning poem, excellently written, in true love all imperfections become perfection.

"I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy
Sunnyone
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11 posted 07-08-2001 10:16 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Oh, you know how much I love this one, and I just have to say that it is perfect for me right now!!!  

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    

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