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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2000-08-12 04:31 PM


hopefully this one wont get taken down like the others...

~Addiction~

this world is non fiction
like my addiction
all alone a tortured soul
two parts become one whole
divided by a wall of hate
no motive for debate
cant stand this addiction
lost all convictions
diving into worthlessness
i wish i was fictious
a maze of distruction
logic has no function
release has come at last
time goes by so fast
all i need is pain
to relieve this hellish strain
blade drops to the floor
now i need some more
i just feel the need
the true need to bleed
i'll hold back for you today
but it doesn't matter anyway
because it might change tommorrow
i might feel more sorrow
than i feel today
i hate feeling this way.
with this addiction
the feelings never stay.


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

© Copyright 2000 Nicole Crisp - All Rights Reserved
Click
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1 posted 2000-08-12 06:11 PM


Wow!!  I know a little.....
  Thank you!

Click


qtpieelmo
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2 posted 2000-08-12 07:17 PM


wow great poem I've been there too it'll get better   LOVE ELMO
Nikolette Sadness
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3 posted 2000-08-12 07:26 PM


really? cuz i have been there my whole life and its not seeming to get better

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

catalinamoon
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4 posted 2000-08-12 07:52 PM


Nik, I am so worried about you, please don't give up. We are here for you, as much as strangers can be. And Elmo is right, it will get better. I do know the feeling that it seems like so much more good than bad in your life, but there is always hope, and that is how to keep going. Keep hoping. And you have a talent for writing,which may someday bring you some happiness.
Take care.
Sandra

taramw
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5 posted 2000-08-12 09:35 PM


Hmm.. very emotional indeed... expressed well.  Take care.  
~ Tara ~

LOTR
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6 posted 2000-08-13 01:21 AM


Addiction is a !@#$%^&*()!@, thats for sure. No matter what you're addicted to, been there.
Great job here tho, hang in there, things do get better.
< !signature-->

Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find

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LOTR
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7 posted 2000-08-13 01:29 AM


Addiction is a !@#$%^&*()!@, thats for sure. No matter what you're addicted to, been there.
Great job here tho, hang in there, things do get better.


Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find

Kethry
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8 posted 2000-08-13 06:23 AM


Nik
I agree with the others. Things do get better.You just have to keep working through it a day/hour/minute at a time.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

darkstar
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9 posted 2000-08-13 11:52 AM


We should make some kind of support group...(we could call it "people who shouldn't have access to razor blades"...or some s*** like that...) Good poem...it's cool.

Dark Star

MMoonchild
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10 posted 2000-08-13 08:13 PM


Nik....big hugssssss

and  there are many addictions in life...some worse than others but all making time seem to stand still to suffer a bit longer than any one wishes to or should
~~smiles for you
Maureen

Paula Finn
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11 posted 2000-08-13 08:28 PM


DAMN Nik...do I gotta get that coat out of my closet? Dont make me do that girl...I am ALWAYS here.
Nikolette Sadness
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12 posted 2000-08-13 10:07 PM


thanks everyone for your replies...i hope you liked this poem  

oh and paula you better take that white coat off...and stay away from with with that straight jacket...i'm not crazy anymore!!!

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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