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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
My mind is calling... Let it ring... I don't care... What it will say... When I answer... My thoughts... COMPLICATED is what I am IRRITATED by who I am CONFRONTATED with the truth... That I'm worthless.... There's no turning back... And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back.......... |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Dear Virgin, Wondeful poem...This poem clearly expresses how I feel sometimes. Great job. Dreams are the the gateways to making the impossible possible |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Wel, thank you, I hope you know that you're not the only one.... love, Virgin Suïcide... And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back.......... |
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For you I'll hate New Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5 |
My mind was calling ... Remembering thee.. I couldn't bear... To forget thee... When I answer.. My thoughts... LOVED is what you are LOVED by more than you could bear CHOICES for you to make... Worthless is how you see yourself... And yet you shall remain loved, forever... |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Wow. This was oh-so powerful. I loved it.  Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Wow..answering the mind? Wow this is strong ...good work and has anyone ever mentioned that you have a cool user name? If they haven't...well you do "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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bubbles chan Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 17 |
This poem was very depressing and inspirational at the same time i hope you write more like this one Time and space are not constant, but floating around like the inside of a giant metaphysical lava lamp |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
virgin...i really like this poem very much! and for you i'll hate...that was a very nice turn around...prolly made vs feel pretty good i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Thank you all, for your compliments, your loving words and for showing that I'm not alone...And For you I'll hate, thanks for your version of it... love, Virgin Suïcide... And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back.......... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
If there's no turning back. You have to go forward and look up the sun still shines behind the clouds. Strong poem Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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