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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738


0 posted 2000-08-12 08:22 AM


Hmm... I remember your hot
sweet breath on my face,
Whispered endearments, sweet kisses
another time and place.

Beautiful dreams, prince and princess
we both held the key,
Soft trembling bodies, wonder,
delight, you and me.

~ Tara ~

© Copyright 2000 Tara - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-08-12 08:42 AM


Tara, I remember that same thing.   Wish it could be more than a memory. Nicely put. Sweet poem.
Cat....

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-08-12 09:15 AM


Tara this is well expressed and has some beautiful phrases in it.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-08-12 10:38 AM


I agree!  This was a beautiful vision.  Nice job here.
DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


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