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LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

0 posted 2000-08-11 04:30 PM

Imagine, different twist of fate
A life in which I'm not too late
We meet much sooner in that life
Before you choose HER as a wife.

Imagine, different circumstance
Suppose we'd really had a chance
In equal status, equal age
Back then, you weren't yet engaged...

Imagine, different destiny
If one could shape up history
Just tell me now and set me free
Would you love me?
Would you pick me?

This is onl my second poem, so don't judge me too harshly..

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

1 posted 2000-08-11 04:34 PM

we arent harsh here!*smile*
this is a very nice poem....and it asks questions i think many of us ask when we "lose chances".....Welcome to Passions!
looking forward to more!
~Dawn

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

2 posted 2000-08-11 04:53 PM

Thanks a lot Dawn

Glad to join aboard!

))

Chained2illusions
Junior Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 45
Elyria, Oh *at the moment*

3 posted 2000-08-11 05:41 PM

LM, anyone who would judge this harshly..has never known the pain of loving someone that belongs to another.

Its really good..and really hits home for myself.

Please keep writing. Im new too..

Denise

There is fire inside us all..it sparks with just the match.

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

4 posted 2000-08-11 05:51 PM

Thanks Denise

I've read you poem too and loved it, thank you very much.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2000-08-11 07:45 PM

Welcome to the family! We are never harsh here. This has such a sadness to it..how many times have we all met someone only to 'imagine' what if...?

Please check your email for a special welcome!

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

6 posted 2000-08-12 03:32 AM

Thank you DeVine, it really means a lot to have some feedback

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

7 posted 2000-08-12 08:35 AM

A nice piece of work & welcome to the family my dear

LOL what makes you think we are gonna be harsh with you

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2000-08-12 09:25 AM

Welcome to Passions. I like this it's almost a "What if" type of poem. Look forward to reading more of your work.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

9 posted 2000-08-12 03:55 PM

Thanks Kethry and CrEaTuRe for the support

I just wasn't sure if my little poem can measure up to all those fantastic stuff I've been reading here....

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

10 posted 2000-08-12 09:54 PM

LM... I read this yesterday, and thought I had posted a reply, but I didn't. *Forgive me*?

I loved this one, and feel the same about my ex fiancee. It was too late... he chose others many times. Now he wants me back, but I must be strong. I'm rambling now, so forgive me once more. I loved it. Like I said... Keep it up.

btw... welcome to passions!

Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken.
~Lil OnE~

Kirsty24
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 40
Australia

11 posted 2000-08-12 11:37 PM

LM - this is a very nice poem.. It hits places for those of us who have been in a similar circumstance

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