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Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-08-11 01:16 PM


May you burn in hell
I don't care
about you
not anymore

you thought so
but you're wrong
I really don't give
a damn...

so now you've got
a problem
who to turn to
now

but I don't care
you're outta my life
Gone
for good


sorry, I was kinda angry when I was left by my loved one.....

[This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 08-12-2000).]

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Virgin Suïcide
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1 posted 2000-09-08 01:07 PM


uhmz...I kinda get this one to the top, cuz I really need a reply or something to this one....

love, Virgin Suïcide...

"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

Nikolette Sadness
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Posts 337
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2 posted 2000-09-08 01:14 PM


VS...i like this one..but i'm a bit confused...did someone die..or did someone leave you????

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Virgin Suïcide
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Posts 319
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3 posted 2000-09-08 01:25 PM


he was gone... hehe, it's like most of my poems are bout the same person...gotta thank him for his inspiration I guess... but he left me...and hurted me a lot and now tries to get back to me... But I was like really sad first, then I got really angry (when I wrote the poem) then really confused and now I still don't know what to do...so that's why I need the replies I guess....cleared  up your mind a bit??

love, Virgin Suïcide...
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I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~


[This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 09-08-2000).]

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-09-08 02:14 PM


but I don't care
you're outta my life
Gone
for good

It sounds like you are getting over this guy!! I wish you the best. Keep up the good work!!


~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~


Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
5 posted 2000-09-08 03:04 PM


I'm trying to at the mo....but he now acts like really nice again....dammit....

love, Virgin Suïcide...


I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
6 posted 2000-09-08 03:26 PM


Cool poem...sorry it happened to ya...

Dark Star

Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
7 posted 2000-09-08 04:06 PM


when you finally give up on caring, that's when they want you back. *sigh* relationships... they are only good for inspiration. and maybe love (feeling wistful) okay, i'm done rambling. great way to capture these emotions.
Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
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8 posted 2000-09-08 04:10 PM


hehe, thnx!

love, Virgin Suïcide


I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

9 posted 2000-09-08 05:29 PM


Yeah... it's so confusing... sorry can't help, I myself don't have a clue what I want or feel anymore! Hope you'll make the right choice!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


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