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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Look at me, I also bleed. Not just want, it's more than need. Hold you close, my only desire. To see you, sets my soul afire. Let me in, I'll make it real. Just let me know, what you feel. Can we let, this go on? Tell me, is it wright or wrong. I can not get, you to see. How much I want, you here with me. Time is heavy, love to save. It goes so quick, and then the grave. Click |
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Jaded_Innocence New Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 7USA |
Excellent poem Click...it has a charm about it that I can't quite put my finger on but it's definately there.  Keep it up! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good one, Click. And so true, how fast life goes by, and we need to grab the love and not let go. Glad to see this one has not been bumped!! cat.... |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
"Hold you close my only desire To see you sets my soul afire" Ooohhhh....how familiar... LOVE IT!!! |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Click~~Another fine piece. "Time is heavy, Love to save," Sure know that one! Hope You are well.Take care, ~Sash~ |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Nice flow here, Click! Yet another great poem from you. You write with such passion. I can also feel the energy from your poetry. DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
you always show me what a tortured yet sweet sweet heart a man can have. thank you dear one. this is by far one of your best. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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