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You are my dream
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You are my dream |
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Chained2illusions Junior Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 45Elyria, Oh *at the moment* |
I was a child when I met you, a mere girl feeling things that should have been left until she were older... At twelve I saw the face I knew I wanted to be with. Now, fourteen years later, so many relationships past, so many different roads taken... I am still led full circle to you. At twelve you seemed a god to me, your smile, your cocky manner your eyes, of azure ice... You were my dream... At twenty six you seem a man to me.. your smile your sweet and caring manner your eyes, of azure ice... You are my dream. Denise There is fire inside us all..it sparks with just the match. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
This si lovely....how well I can relate...reminds me of my husband!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Jaded_Innocence New Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 7USA |
Lovely poem...you've expressed yourself very well in this piece. I like how you combined the past and the present. It's amazing how things work like that sometimes. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
OOOOoooooohhhhhh.... It's so great! I wish by the time I'm 26 I'll get the man who is my dream... |
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Chained2illusions Junior Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 45Elyria, Oh *at the moment* |
Thank you everyone for your comments..such a tender subject for me..and I appreciate the words. Denise~ |
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